Parts of the video that we like!

the first part which we think is quite good is when tonna is arguing with the boy in our video because we think its good how we've followed a storyline throughout as well as following the typical music video, we think this made our video a little bit different to others.

The night scenes played a key part towards the look and mood of our video. As Entering Booty Town is a very girly pop powered song we thought some of the settings should be filmed during the night as to create an atmosphere that felt more like going out for the evening to party and it would also give a greater sense of the tough girl genre of which we were aiming to create. A group of girls strutting down the dark streets portrays that image quite clearly.

Screen Grab of Final Edit

Final Video

Our feedback.

we agree with most of these comments and are wuite pleased with our music video, although we would of liked it to be better, we had troubles with the camera which shortened our time editing as we could not have uploaded the footage quicker. To avoid this we could have mnaged our time quicker. Because of our camera troubles we also had to upload our footage in i movie rather than final cut so this alo caused some f our shots to jump and had glitches in it, because of this we left alot of our new footge out because it was almost impossible to lipsync it! however we are pleaed with our video and glad that we managed to finish it!

Feedback from our final music video!

'closes the door' good shot wth music
good shots/actng with the bofriend.
Too dark in some shots compared to other shots there are also very different lighting techniques.
Lipsyncing out sometimes.
narative?- man dancing?
Performance is good. however, sometimes pulling up top etc.
Mirror in car good angle.
cut away story line was good.
argument sequence worked well.
Some footage glithcy/out of sync.
mirror angle good.
Good performance.
Shots follow lyrics.